sometimes i don't even know why i'm still breathing.
something new for you guys,
i'd love feedback on it, negative or positive. <3
i apologize for not posting something in quite some time,
writers block always seems to creep up on me.
don't be afraid to point out any spelling or grammar errors. <3
i'd like to know:
-after reading the last stanza, did you understand the concept of the medulla and cerebrum?
-do you think the title fits? or should it be changed? suggestions?
-what line gives the best visual/image?
-do you have a favorite line? if so, what is it and why?
(please, don't feel like you need to answer these)
*please, whatever you do, don't take my work and pass it off as your own. please, please, please. <3